Don’t limit yourself to using student papers as models—articles from professional or trade journals can also serve as effective writing samples.
Providing students with writing models
is a time-honored, and often highly
effective, teaching technique. In
some cases, using models seems almost a necessity:
imagine trying to teach someone to write
a resume without showing them examples.
But using writing models is not without
hazards, one of which came to light in a recent
discussion on the W course instructors’
listserv. The exchange was sparked by a question
from an instructor who’d used a model
but was concerned when students followed
it slavishly.
It’s not surprising that students are sometimes
reluctant to deviate from a model. With
the advent of standardized writing tests, many
of today’s students have been encouraged to
see models as prescriptive: Here’s what they
expect on the test.
Students are also more likely to adhere rigidly
to models if they feel intimidated or overwhelmed
by writing. When they are unsure
of their abilities—or uncertain about their
instructor’s expectations—students tend to
view a model as a life raft they can cling to.
Of course, sometimes it’s perfectly acceptable
for students to be less than original in
their approach to writing.
In certain academic fields, much of the
writing follows specific and unvarying rules.
If that’s the case in your discipline, then by all
means, give your students a model.
Even in disciplines that prize creative expression,
though, models can provide students
with a necessary foundation. That’s
particularly important when the material is
unfamiliar or challenging. In such instances,
models may be a crutch, but a crutch that students
may genuinely need.
But is it possible to incorporate writing
models into a course and still encourage
critical thinking and creativity? You’ll need
to experiment to find what works for your
particular situation, but the following guidelines
can help:
Offer multiple samples. If you point to
only one model, you’re feeding into students’
tendency to want the one and only right answer.
Of course, even three or four examples
won’t begin to suggest the endless possibilities
for how to write something, but they’re
at least a start.
Introduce models later not sooner. If you
assign a piece of writing and then immediately
show students a model, you may limit their
ability to interpret the assignment in their
own way. If that’s a problem for you, consider
sharing sample responses only after students
are thoroughly engaged in a large project or
have already written several low-stakes pieces.
Let them develop both some confidence and
some ideas of their own before adding examples
into the mix.
Use parts not wholes. Rather than showing
students a completed piece, use only a few
paragraphs or even individual sentences to
help them see how to handle a specific challenge,
such as how to introduce a quotation or
summarize data. By using only portions of a
text, you offer specific help without establishing
too many other expectations.
Consider the source. Most instructors
use student papers as models. It’s best to use
pieces submitted in past semesters, but be
sure to get the students’ permission. Some instructors
like to present the papers along with
the grades and comments, so students can see
what it takes to earn an A, B, or C. Be careful,
though, if you’re discussing student papers
that are less than successful; if your criticism
seems too harsh, students may fear they’ll
never be able to meet your expectations.
You can, of course, also create a model
yourself by producing a response to your own
assignment. It’s time-consuming, but you
may discover both problems and potentials
you hadn’t anticipated in the assignment. You
may also feel more empathy toward your students
as your fingers hover over the keyboard.
Another option is to share your own
professional writing with your class. While
probably not immediately relevant to your
students’ own work, such examples can give
them insight into the writing process. Provide
a first draft and subsequent revisions and
you’ll be giving students tangible evidence
that revision is both routine and necessary for
anyone who writes successfully.
Perhaps the best models are professional
examples from your discipline. Let students
see the kind of writing that will be expected
of them in future coursework or in the workplace.
Often, the less successful the piece, the
more they’ll learn from it.
Talk it up. Whatever models you use, take
time to discuss them with students. Ask them
to consider the choices the author has made
and analyze how those choices affect the
reader. In doing so, you’ll be modeling for
them how to use a model. After all, your ultimate
goal is not only to have them learn how
to follow a model, but to know how—and
when—to deviate from one, as well.
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