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What do you do when you’re reading a student’s paper and come upon an especially
confusing passage? What if the syntax is mangled or the ideas contradictory?
Do you jot words in the margin? Do you cross out redundant phrases and correct
punctuation errors? Do you—ever mindful of how many more assignments you have
left to read—adopt teacher shorthand? (“Sp, “Awk!”)
How do your students react when they read your comments—if they read them?
Do those comments help your students write better?
Research suggests that instructors’ written comments—at least the more typical
kinds of comments—do little to help students improve their writing. Since making
those observations can be time-consuming, it’s worth taking another look at
how to make your comments matter. Perhaps the most helpful way to think about
paper comments is to imagine sharing your own writing with a colleague. You’d
expect a respectful tone, an honest (but kind) sense of the worth of your effort,
and—most of all—some specific guidance on how to proceed. With that in mind,
here are some additional suggestions.
Time your words.
Commenting on final papers is largely futile; once you put a grade on a paper,
students have little interest in anything else you say. Reserve the bulk of
your comments for earlier drafts, when students can consider your advice in
their revisions.
Find your focus.
Ideally, when you give students an assignment, you have a specific pedagogical
goal in mind. Perhaps you want students to summarize both sides of an argument
or use research to defend their position. Keep that goal in mind as you read,
so you can focus your comments on bigger issues. That’s more efficient for
you and less overwhelming for students.
Ask questions.
By asking questions, you can encourage students to expand their assumptions,
or push the limits of their knowledge. When you ask questions rather than make
suggestions, you keep students engaged in the process and remind them that
it’s ultimately their work, not yours.
Be specific.
When you’re working through a batch of papers, it’s tempting to rely on stock
phrases: “Good introduction” or “Needs more analysis.” But such wholesale comments
are of little use to students when they revise. The more specific your questions
and comments, the more likely you are to see improved final drafts.
Be quiet.
Sometimes students don’t need an instructor to say anything about their writing,
particularly on brief assignments or explorations leading to a longer project.
Or take a few minutes of class time to give general impressions about what
you read. (“From your journals, I see that many of you are confusing two key
concepts.”)
Resist the urge to correct.
When most instructors see grammatical mistakes and spelling errors, they
feel compelled to correct them. Unfortunately, correcting errors for students
doesn’t teach them much. It also sends the message that you’re hunting down
errors rather than considering what students have to say. If a draft has an
overwhelming number of errors, you might mark up one paragraph or one page
and write a note offering to discuss the problems in person or suggesting the
student get help from he University Writing Center. You can also er models
for students to revise as a class or in a group. Another option: teach students
to correct the three or four errors that paricularly frustrate you as a reader,
and limit yourself to identifying only those. But isn’t it a teacher’s job
to point out errors? Not if pointng them out will do nothing to help students
eliminate them in the future.
Resist the urge to rewrite.
Just as it’s tempting to fix errors, it’s also tempting to rewrite a wordy
passage or awkward sentence. But making such editorial changes denies students
the chance to learn to revise for themselves. Furthermore, there are countless
ways to revise a sentence; by choosing one, you impose your preferences on
your students. Besides, if students are going to undertake a major revision,
they may cut or reword the problematic section anyway. If you’d like to teach
students how to revise for style and clarity, consider having the class work
together to rework a model—perhaps a less-than-stellar piece of “professional”
writing from your field.
Be a reader.
Writing is ultimately about communicating ideas and information to a reader,
a fact students often forget. Let them know you are, first and foremost, a
reader, trying to make sense of their words. The reader’s comment “I can’t
follow your meaning here” is less hostile than the teacher’s “Faulty syntax!”
and more likely to encourage students to revise.
Make it a conversation.
Before students turn in a draft, ask them to write their own comments about
it. Then you can address their concerns and answer their questions, which allows
you to be teacher and advisor, rather than judge and jury. It also encourages
them to take responsibility for their written efforts and reflect on what is
and isn’t working for them in their writing process.
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