Why do we see so many errors in our students’ writing? Most of us assume students make errors because they don’t know “the rules.” That surprises us, given the K-12 emphasis on grammar, mechanics, and punctuation.
But a meta-analysis of empirical studies of direct grammar instruction finds such teaching doesn’t improve writing. In Research on Written Composition, George Hillocks observes, “if schools insist upon teaching the identification of parts of speech, the parsing or diagramming of sentences, or other concepts of traditional school grammar … they cannot defend it as a means of improving the quality of writing.”
In fact the analysis found the effect to be somewhat adverse, perhaps
because instruction time is diverted from the actual practice of
writing, editing, and proofreading.
In most introductory college
writing courses, students will get that practice, along with a review
of the conventions of edited American English—grammar, punctuation, and
usage. And by the end of those courses, most students can produce
fairly well-edited prose, at least if they take time to compose,
revise, and proofread.
Still, they may write prose chock-full of
errors. Sometimes the problem is lack of practice—editing skills
degenerate quickly if not applied. Errors also result when writers take
on a new subject or attempt a new form of writing. Researchers Joseph
Williams and Gregory Colomb noted that when students struggle to master
forms requiring insider knowledge, they make predictable errors, such
as “say[ing] those things that are ordinarily left unsaid just because
they are shared” or using terms in the wrong context. They may also
make mistakes in areas they have already mastered, like grammar or
syntax, mistakes they can usually correct with more careful editing and
proofreading.
Errors often crop up because we tell students we
are not grading on “grammar,” only on content. Or students think the
writing they do for class doesn’t really matter. Faced with lower
grades than he had expected, a young man asked one of my colleagues,
wide-eyed, “So this writing really counts?” To show students it does
count may take more than grades. Writing for school can seem like an
empty exercise. Students like those in Darla-Jean Weatherford’s
petroleum engineering class who write for real audiences will take more
care with their work and reduce errors.
In a review of the
practices of experienced composition instructors, Richard Straub and
Ronald Lunsford found that expert readers had a surprising approach to
student error. They didn’t mark every mistake and they rarely, if ever,
made editorial suggestions. Part of the reason for that hands-off
attitude may be that expert readers recognize error for what it often
is: evidence of a fertile and inventive mind rushing to figure out and
articulate a problem. Students need time and room to make, and also
correct, errors, which is why requiring multiple drafts is such a
valuable practice.
As novices to the discourse we teach,
students are reaching both for language and ideas, for form and
content. When we ask them to be concerned with surface errors too early
in the process, we invite them to monitor their thinking to such an
extent that they censor their ideas and stifle their burgeoning
critical judgment.
Too often, students tell me they avoid long
sentences (and perhaps complex thoughts) for fear of making a comma
error. I don’t want to read or correct their errors, but I also don’t
want to read error-free, but otherwise mundane and critically naïve
prose.
—Dr. Valerie M. Balester Executive Director University Writing Center v-balester@tamu.edu
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